Possible Contest Entry

Here is an excerpt from something I might enter in a contest:

I felt the gentle chills of the snow land on my face and catch in my hair. I softly trudged down my street through the snow and watched the trees gracefully sway in the wind. When I reached the park at the other end of my neighborhood I plopped myself down on the bench and watched the clouds swirl around the sky. I silently looked around to see if anyone was glancing my way and when I was positive there was no one around I stuck my tongue out of my mouth into the chilly December air in attempt to catch a snowflake. My tongue got chills as one too many landed themselves upon my tongue and I threw myself into the white, snowy ground in an attempt to stop my boredom. While I was staring at all of the soft, gentle flakes landing on the ground I couldn't help but think wow.

Tell me whether I should enter it or not.

Love,
♥Colleen♥

Him

He makes your heart race,
But you chose to ignore that,
His smile triggers yours,
But you say,"We're just friends.",
The thought of you together makes you have butterflies,
But you say its because of the test in the next period,
He asks you for help with girls and a little green monster rumbles deep inside,
But you say thats because if he had a girlfriend she wouldn't want you to be friends,
The girls that like him insult you after seeing him flash you a smile,
But you say it's because you hang out so much,
You say,"I love him like my brother."
But you should say,"I love him with all my heart."

Thanks for reading!

Love,
♥Colleen♥

Best Friends ♥

They're your cushion when you fall,
Your shoulder to cry on,
Your own personal tabloid,
The drama in your life when yours isn't enough,
The one there for the laughs and the crys,
The one that joins in when you're acting retarded,
They're the one that makes you laugh when you want to cry,
The one that gets you crying with them when you just want a good laugh,
They're the kind of friends where you fight one day and gossip the next,
The ones that you frown because they're going away for a weekend,
And you cry when its a week,
The ones you must talk to everyday,
And always do,
The ones that you miss more then anything even when you just saw them,
The person that you pray to have classes with,
And cry when you don't,
The ones that you're the most scared of losing,
Even though your friendship could jump the moon and come out alright,
They're you're friend by destiny,
Your sister by choice,
And the closest thing to a gift from heaven that you'll ever get.

Love,
Colleen♥